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thank you for commenting. The reason the excerpt from the short story is so confusing is because it’s written in second person. The main character is you. You are Mary’s friend. The setting I thought was made quite clear. The place is Hopper Creek, a made up place (obviously) and the time can be any time you want. I am writing this s…[Read more]

This is only my third post, and I just need some feedback on the first part of a short story I’m writing for a contest. It’s called “Nothing Ever Happens in Hopper Creek” and it’s meant to be a horror-like story, but it ifs not tell me. It’s also written in second person to make the reader feel part of the story. Please let me have all feedback,…[Read more]

As the show progressed, and new doctors emerged, they became, well, more serious. Let’s start with the revival, number Nine. He was cheeky, and funny, but that was to cover up the shame of what he’d done. Ten was still not ready to confront his actions, and as Davros himself put it “Never looking back, because he dare not.” Eleven, I could start a…[Read more]

This is my first post, and I would like to say something about the episode “Love and Monsters”. My all time favorite Doctor Who quote is “We forget because we must.” from that episode. People look at it and go “Oh, that’s deep.” and don’t think about it anymore. They don’t realize how deep it actually goes. It means the pain in our lives is so…[Read more]