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				<title>JimTheFish replied to the topic On The Sofa (6) in the forum General</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@whohar &#8212; No problem. Yes, Amazon is kinda prescriptive at the moment but if you&#8217;ve got a feature it&#8217;s worth popping it on &#8212; although if you&#8217;ve been able to find interest elsewhere then that should definitely take priority. You&#8217;re working on a WW2 drama? Me too at the moment. Maybe we should compare notes.</p>
<p><a href='http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/members/ichabod/' rel="nofollow">@ichabod</a> &#8212; I loved the Red Riding&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-45183"><a href="http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/forums/topic/on-the-sofa-6/page/11/#post-39306" rel="nofollow">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>WhoHar replied to the topic On The Sofa (6) in the forum General</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/members/purofilion/' rel="nofollow">@purofilion</a><br />
Thanks.</p>
<p><a href='http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/members/donnanoble/' rel="nofollow">@DonnaNoble</a> has made a smart move in asking for feedback, no matter how nerve-wracking that can be. Part of writing is accepting positive feedback, as is re-writing. A lot of re-writing.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t mind the re-writing part so much bit generally have 3 or 4 scripts in various stages on the go to keep it interesting. Funnily&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-45179"><a href="http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/forums/topic/on-the-sofa-6/page/11/#post-39302" rel="nofollow">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>WhoHar replied to the topic On The Sofa (6) in the forum General</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/members/donnanoble/' rel="nofollow">@DonnaNoble</a></p>
<p>How short is the short story? 10 pages, 20?</p>
<p>In the opening, you need to set the scene pretty quickly &#8211; maybe in the first 10% of your story, so 1 or 2 pages. Exposition.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not really getting a sense of either the place (where, when) or any of the main characters (who they are, what drives them). In DW terms think of the pre-credit&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-45176"><a href="http://www.thedoctorwhoforum.com/forums/topic/on-the-sofa-6/page/11/#post-39299" rel="nofollow">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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