• Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    awe thank you Rule1, I never expected this and after a sour note to the day seeing this was soo sweet and heartwarming.

    Take care everyone stay positive hugs and love πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Regards – Declan Sargent

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I don’t know if sharing my own writing here is good or not but I had like a speed write it was great perfect songs and apart from a little logic thing I can fix out later (I have fixed spelling mistakes) I am amazed I wrote all this fast soo well and just buzzing want to share it but all my friends seem…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I’m super happy πŸ™‚

    Today I thought I want to share my writing you know, I tried a different site I find slow for some technical reason, and found this awesome sight first time today πŸ™‚

    Great Writing place πŸ™‚

    I was in a 1 hour Zoom Meeting with other writers having a great relaxing time looking out the…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I’m not trying to boast or anything , plus I have to edit , connect scenes , all the technical stuff and learning to plan but I re checked this from Brandon Sanderson –

    ‘If can write 4 hours a week , can write 2000 words , in a year can write a book’ – I’m not perfect or joking around but I have smashed…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    @Winston πŸ™‚ thank you very much , the online idea might be good πŸ™‚

    Also by like craziness haha I woke up tired so stayed in bed (thanks fly’s in my room and tornado dreams) haha and started to read my story and bingo I figured out name – Carrius Disease (story disease) plus health check up scene which…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Today I found out lost a little piece that I was writing (one of my fav parts) but I can re do it kinda of from memory.

    But that happening again and having to re start parts , and videos etc I’ve watched today – I wanna improve

    I am going to try to write better – first trying to get enough space to…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I just thought it best share/post the story elements I wrote in a separate box/bubble cause of word count limit ect

    Here we go today was great πŸ™‚

    P.S. I know I have a double paragraph cause I added a little to the newest one and kept the original to see the progress but as I say gonna go to warm bed soon…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    As I mentioned in my small post earlier ha I wrote lots today well yesterday and yes I know bunch of spelling mistakes and random notes but I watched that sweet film again soo happy πŸ™‚ then this Christmas heist type film was on and right now its 04:01 am ha and like I just want to rest you know and plus…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Films thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I have wrote soo much today over 2000 words in my story but just here now cause that film Triple X Secret Mission is on again and I am watching with joy all over my face πŸ™‚

    Take care everyone stay positive hugs health happiness and love πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Regards – Declan Sargent

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I worked on the scene , was a fast fix at first but then some elements took time but I really love it

    Sometimes a simple change or word makes all the difference or knowing when to cut an ending to a sentence πŸ™‚

    I know maybe not all is perfect (have to work on that Mudfruit sentence too) but I really…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Wow an 1 and 12 minutes ago from my last post time fly’s

    I tried writing this section over and over I have multiple screenshots showing changes haha

    But I want it this time how it is cause its probs the most of written so far this year πŸ™‚ and I am quite enjoying the scene just trying to work out better…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I started writing early today but didn’t get far

    Currently home 22:27 was at Dericks but I am writing now and wanna try to carry on the scene if I can that I was writing this Morning πŸ™‚

    I’ve learn soo much about the eye today just from a single sentence and learnt even more just now thinking what do you…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Here we are again ha – was a real struggle to actually keep this going and not flying off the rails cause worried and sad about Melda but I can slowly fix that starting tomorrow πŸ™‚

    I wrote some more and like again maybe I am being stupid with limiting myself to such little time and pushing myself to think…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚Β  πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    To start – My previous message in film section about Triple X Radical Mission film – I tried to post that yesterday (well Early Morning) which explains the time I talked about it and going out tomorrow – I’ve been out but yesterday my post wasn’t sending through properly so now I’ve copied and pasted…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Films thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I’m meant to be going out at 9 ish today (Morning) but its 2am haha just watched the most crazy funny film in a long time πŸ™‚

    At first it had German music and I knew the song cause used to listen to it and other German songs cause this girl at school not sure if I’ve mentioned her but yeah

    And was like ah…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    So day 2 ha and like again was at Dericks house a lot of the day with new friend Joao joining little later πŸ™‚

    And so by time at home was listening to Derick , then like watching T.V. , listening to writing advice ect , then X Factor in a way was on T.V. and I got side tracked haha and again in a kinda of…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic The Winchester

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I just watched this video –Β I’ve Spent Ten Years Building A Fantasy World β€” How Worldbuilding Changed My Life | Talking Tumiun (youtube.com)

    I know not everyone is writing or thinking about these things but I watched the whole video and new to this Youtuber I think – Rick seems like a really humble and ho…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I wasn’t sure what to do currently so I just started watching all of Jed Herne’s YouTube videos from the start of his channel been learning little writing advices in like simple understandable way πŸ™‚

    I’ve kinda realized now my main character though kinda snappy and like villainousΒ  actions and traits I…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic General Books thread

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    I was in a bit of a rush haha and not perfectly happy apart from the ending part I felt was getting somewhere but I did say I will write something each day πŸ™‚

    We had lunch , family leaving , long time at Dericks then my Paradox predicament haha but I got something just trying to start somewhere and here…[Read more]

  • Oochillyo replied to the topic On the Sofa 11

    hey everyone πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ how are you all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    So went to Dericks house and later friend joined πŸ™‚ small nibble type things and chat πŸ™‚

    I was thinking lot of story things and wondered what is a paradox and like if it could happen would it actually do or change anything or is it just the film idea we have of it

    Like I was thinking previous times about…[Read more]

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